New Orleans CityBusiness features this headline: N.O. area shed 1,800 jobs over the year. I see two things wrong with this headline.
- The subject, “area,” is singular, and should therefore take a singular verb. (The story talks about jobs being lost now. So the verb’s tense is presumably present, not past.)
- More importantly, the verb should not be “shed.” That word implies that the 1,800 jobs were unnecessary or superfluous, which insults the 1,800 who lost their jobs. “Loses” would be a more appropriate (and a grammatically correct) verb.

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